Darkness divides the land,
to the point where The king was murdered,
dictated by lord Nathak’s hand,
Er’rets is doomed,
The evil crown prince Gidon Hadar,
King Axle’s son,
everyone prefered the latter,
But a young stray boy,
Nothing to anyone,
nothing but a toy,
Except to Lord Nathak,
Achan was his name,
Trouble it meant,
but to Achan it was no game,
Head cook Poril beat every day,
treated like a dog,
he must face the many trials that before him lay.
-Ness Hajicek, age 9
to the point where The king was murdered,
dictated by lord Nathak’s hand,
Er’rets is doomed,
The evil crown prince Gidon Hadar,
King Axle’s son,
everyone prefered the latter,
But a young stray boy,
Nothing to anyone,
nothing but a toy,
Except to Lord Nathak,
Achan was his name,
Trouble it meant,
but to Achan it was no game,
Head cook Poril beat every day,
treated like a dog,
he must face the many trials that before him lay.
-Ness Hajicek, age 9
Does this happen to be the Hajicek family that I know? Robert and Leighton? Great poem!
I believe that’s the family, yes. 🙂
Thought so. They know a lot of authors. How did you get to know them?
In online writer’s groups.
Sounds about right. 🙂
Jay… lol Yes, that’s my younger sister. 😛
Jay… lol Yes, that’s my younger sister. 😛
LOL yes i am the sister of Leighton & Robert is my dad 🙂 thanks 🙂
Ness
Btw… I am 10 now 😀
Happy (late) birthday, Ness! 🙂
Btw… I am 10 now 😀
Happy (late) birthday, Ness! 🙂