Darkness divides the land,
to the point where The king was murdered,
dictated by lord Nathak’s hand,
Er’rets is doomed,
The evil crown prince Gidon Hadar,
King Axle’s son,
everyone prefered the latter,
But a young stray boy,
Nothing to anyone,
nothing but a toy,
Except to Lord Nathak,
Achan was his name,
Trouble it meant,
but to Achan it was no game,
Head cook Poril beat every day,
treated like a dog,
he must face the many trials that before him lay.
-Ness Hajicek, age 9
to the point where The king was murdered,
dictated by lord Nathak’s hand,
Er’rets is doomed,
The evil crown prince Gidon Hadar,
King Axle’s son,
everyone prefered the latter,
But a young stray boy,
Nothing to anyone,
nothing but a toy,
Except to Lord Nathak,
Achan was his name,
Trouble it meant,
but to Achan it was no game,
Head cook Poril beat every day,
treated like a dog,
he must face the many trials that before him lay.
-Ness Hajicek, age 9
Sir Emeth Mimetes says
Does this happen to be the Hajicek family that I know? Robert and Leighton? Great poem!
novelteen says
I believe that’s the family, yes. 🙂
Sir Emeth Mimetes says
Thought so. They know a lot of authors. How did you get to know them?
novelteen says
In online writer’s groups.
Sir Emeth Mimetes says
Sounds about right. 🙂
Ness says
Jay… lol Yes, that’s my younger sister. 😛
Leighton says
Jay… lol Yes, that’s my younger sister. 😛
Ness says
LOL yes i am the sister of Leighton & Robert is my dad 🙂 thanks 🙂
Ness
Ness says
Btw… I am 10 now 😀
novelteen says
Happy (late) birthday, Ness! 🙂
Ness says
Btw… I am 10 now 😀
novelteen says
Happy (late) birthday, Ness! 🙂